question ℓ єχι (ιѕ α ƒяєαкιη ρяιηcєѕs) : How is my writing? * 20 * rule of nature? “Wake up, dear! First day of school!” Mom shouted enthusiastically, shaking me awake. “Augggggghhhhhhh.” I groaned, twisting and pulling on my pillow one ear. “Awww, you like the school.” she said sarcastically. . “Go take a shower, honey,” she said, pulling me out of my bed and handed me a towel, I went to the bathroom like a zombie: .. Slowly my body glide I turned on the water and held my ears. Exausted not only my best friend Lucy whole SMS last night, the sound of water was also extended to echo the small bathrooms. Also, I have Grumpy does not sleep in for the first time in months. I undressed and got into the shower and tried to wake up let the hot water soak my skin. I stayed there for a few minutes before shampooing. I got out and wrapped a towel around my soft blue body, walked into the hallway and I made my way to my room to change. I put my clothes the night before, a short skirt over black tights jeans and pink and brown striped shirt and some gold hoop small earrings and pulled my face-length midnight black hair in a ponytail two. I waddled down the stairs and sat gaping the kitchen table and began to slowly chewing a bagel., Where I saw my little brother was sitting, shoveling rice crispies and chocolate chip pancakes in his mouth, as if it were his last meal. “It’s time, you’re down, Winnie.” Kaitlyn, my older sister told me that picking. At his plate of fruit “You are the oppisite of Lucas.” I said, shaking his head, my little brother. ” Well, we all have habits … “she started to say, before mom interrupted him. “Look, Katie, we know that you are trying to be a model, but hunger is not the way.” Mom told him, flipping another crepe garbage collection also my brother. Kate looked at her and gave her new blond hair, she said that they turn over the summer on his shoulder. My sister Veronica imitates him, pushed the threads she had brown hair from her face. I laughed, earning a glare from Katie, who muttered something about them pests. “Now kids dinner ready?” mom rescued us, put uneaten pancakes in the fridge. Lucas looked sad. “Take your backpack and into the car.” She knew Pick Veronica, who was until his mother complained to him pureed peaches. After completion of the child’s mother, we were all set to go. “Let me warn you, Winifred …” Katie started. I looked at my big brown eyes boring into her. “Okay, good. Let me warn you that kids Winnie were bad when I was in college, and” “This is where you have it, I thought it was just genetics.” I said, sticking my tongue on him. “Would you shut up little” Katie’s trying to say, but now it was mother who sparkled. “Do not be alarmed, your sister.” Has warned. I sighed and leaned my head in my hands. “Oh, yeah, the big ugly 16 years scares me.” I said, rolling her eyes. Katie’s body, which offended my “big” comment, even if it is as thin as a stick. “Both need new settings.” Mom told us determine what we look rveiw a “Do you understand” in the mirror. “D We also are in high school, so Katie, exit” Katie turned her head and sourit.Elle quickly but quietly jumped out of the car by. His thick black backpack on them The trip springs Middle School Amertain silent, and I blew a kiss mother and I tried the same thing with Katie did, but the backpack weighed less and I’m stuck. Lucas chuckled and I gave him the evil eye, until it closed. I went to the side of the seat and jumped. “! Goodbye, darling Have a nice day,” Mom told me I was nervous Titulariat.merci for playing 🙂 BTW in 11.Meilleure A. .. Response
by Cassanova
doing very well for 11 I love what you have written, but sometimes it seems to describe more things, if sometimes less is more. Try to be aware of everything you write, and I think you will do well!